自己写的英文文章，高手帮忙改改

问题是真的很多，大概改了一下，自己看看吧
It's a sacred job to be a volunteer .Many countries in Europe train a great number of people to offer free service every year. They are distributed in school, hospital and poverty-stricken areas. Anyhow, it's a good phenomenon.[回车]Recently,many charitable activities were holding in China. They helped the poor and handicapped people by collecting donations. However,there's few people who likes to be a volunteer. Someone appeals that a department should be set up for the poor and handicapped. In spite of this, most poor areas didn't get the help. We need to improve our free service system. [回车]How can we solve it as soon as possible? On one hand, we can give the honorary title to whoever takes part in charitable activities. On the other hand, to found a special field of study is a good way.

不太好！how can we solve it as soon的soon用moon些，句子还有点补通讯！